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pains me to remember
the pain of the girl
the aloneness
of the girl
that nobody saw
pains me to hear
now in my head
the mind of the girl
as she looked
around her
at the world
at her world
nobody saw
pains me to see
can’t do no more for the girl
who saw everything
yet was not seen
just caught between
never quite
here or there
like a solid ghost
nobody saw
she saw
endless
pain
To blabla:
First I want to say how good your writing is! You have such talent.
I’m sorry that your in such pain; it hurts to see someone hurt like that. You seem like a really special person. I hope in time you’ll be able to get out of where you’re in right now. You seem like you have the strength and desire to get there. Hope you know that you don’t and shouldn’t have to do it alone. No matter if it doesn’t feel like that to you. I know how hard it is to ask for help; and only you can be the one to do it, but if you get it from the right place/person, no matter how hard it initially may be, you’ll benefit from it in ways that you can’t when dealing with everything on your own.
My thoughts are with you. And just remember G-d is ALWAYS with you: He’s the one who will always be rooting, helping , caring… for you NO MATTER what.
I’ve read some of the poems on here and I think they’re great Think this idea is such a good one; a place people can have as an additional outlet.
It’s kind’ve hard for me to share my stuff but I’m trying to get better at it and not be so critical…
This is just 1 poem I wrote one time, fast so might need to be worked on..here goes:
I tried so hard
to stay afloat
I tried so hard
to get out
I tried so hard
to forget
I could not try
to forgive
was not given
any reason
nothing was earned
for that right to try
I tried so hard
I was alone
I tried so hard
to not hate them
I tried so hard
to get to where
what they had tried so hard
to make disappear
I tried so hard
the way so long
I tried so hard
had to try harder
I still am
trying
but I am
getting there
I always was
I always knew
that I would
if I
tried so hard
kept at it
and had You
there for me
I figured out
I would if I tried
become so much
stronger
I learned so hard
that you can’t forget
I learned
the hard way
the importance
to look back
to see vividly
It’s hard
to work through
but I am
getting there
I try so hard
to not hate you
can’t you tell
how hard this is
for me
so please give me space
finally
you don’t know
what you did
you tried so hard
to pick and choose
was convenient
what works for you
you say you care
you don’t see
you don’t know
I try so hard
just back off
I’m trying