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Oh boy! How are going to torture me today?

I just hope its a different mod tomorow….

Personally, i try not to put my entireentire songs up, for 1. One day I hope some of these will be famous and then you’ll all know my identity! 2. Sometimes people see them, and they would recognize me, no one knows i have an account here, and Id like to keep it that way. If you really really want to see it, i will post it tomorow and maybe another song and after you see it, I will ask a mod to delete it. Will you do that tomorow if i ask nicely oh kind and considerate annoymous mod (whom i REALLY hope is not 73)

I was writing about how everything is for the best…..like moving away……

I never said ‘There’s a place in my mind’ was by females. That is the one I was reffering to. Did you like ‘Sincerely me’? My favorite song is: if you ask me, i think, your wonderful, your beatiful…….if you ask me I think, its such a shame you don’t agree, cuz there’s SO much of you, you don’t see- if you ask me.

TheMusicMan: The chorus is definetly the main part, it’s the glue of the song that connects everything else. Its the entire idea, the point you are trying to make. I end up writing the chorus first, usually. It’s the easiest! So the tune had to be somewhat good, but if its not the best, (sibce im no where near professional) people would not listen to my songs?

Ask all my teachers, I can’t remember their names either, never the less how to spell them. I know them by what subject they teach. My friend will be like “________ just had twins!”

Me: “WHO???!?!”

Friend: “Ummmm….she’s been our teacher for like 8months already…..you don’t know her name?”

Me: “What can I say? I don’t remember names! What subject does she teach?

Friend: “Seriously? *sigh* She teaches science”

Me: “OHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!….Wait, no one told me she was pregnant!”

Well guess what, in real life, people dont laugh at my mistakes, but when they are down on paper……thats another story

Torah: ?? ???? ?? ???? ??????! ???? ?? ??? ????. ??? ?? ????? ?????????? ??? ??????? ??? ???? ????? ??????

OOOT: Ya, but when you speak as much as I do, it comes out as naturally as english, i dont need to think, unless my friend says: “how do you say that in english?” And im like “……..good question….i dont remember…i think im forgetting my english” writing is much harder ‘is there an ayin or aleph or hey? How do you say invisible????? I mean if i didnt have to write it, it would be simple to explain, but explaining involves too many words to write…oh man, now i need to get a stupid dictionary…..(5 minutes later) finnally found the word…but….OMG why does the translation look like an essay????? Which word to i choose…..hmmmm….eeni meeni mini mo…..’

Moi ausi: please stop telling me my spelling is bad. Wanna bet i can write good if i want????? Ya???? That for the rest of the week every post i write hasta have less than 10 mistakes???????

Torah316torah: ???? ??? ?? ????? ?????? ????!!!!!! ??? ???? ??? ?? ??????,, ??? ??? ????? -???? ???? ?? ?? ???? ?????? ???? ??? ???

Plus my english is perfectly fine, and so is my spelling, I ussually write in a hurry so I don’t look over my work. The only problems I have is knowing where a comma belongs, I tend to always put them in the wrong spots. My friends say english is hard, they are right, you should listen to all the things that come naturally to us! Like there is past progressive, past past, past present, past future!!!! They ask me for help and I say: ” How am I supposed to know the difference? I just learned how to talk!”

Hebrew has MUCH MUCH MUCH more grammer, did you know each verb has 106 ways ro say it depending on what it is, who are you speaking to and who are you talking about. My head hurts tring to remember which one to use….

Plus there are many mistakes we say every day as Haifagirl has showed us again and again

OI : i meant good not goof. Anyway, there are plenty of jewish songs with good lyrics, i particularly like Chanale and Ari Goldwag’s songs. Plus lyrics are practically the same things as poems, i just noticed this, but i tend to think of them both as songs since when i read poems i automatically make up a tune for it. Making up tunes and Ryming words i have been doing since i was little, i hadnt realized what i was doing was actually writing songs till last year.

if you want good poems, there is a poetry thread here and classic.frumteens has TONZ of poems written by teens (im sure the poems are okthere because the girls arent asking for advice and stuff, they are putting out art) a few of my favoeites from frumteens i plan to repost in the poetry section to do them justice and more people will see.

I guess that a niggun is also moving, but is probobly more favorable for a boy since boys and men dont talk about there feelings and express themselves with words like women do. That must be why woman appreciate the lyrics more often.

Mazel Tov construction! Youve written in many articles that its been needed for quite a few years!!!!! Wont your students know somewhat what to expect on their quiz if you have it in the Hamodia???

Im still upset you didnt pick one of our forty or so titles for your book! But, its ok, we got our names in and had alot of fun making up silly names that made us crack up. My family loves your work. But that article seemed so serious about you starting another column under a different name, and it didnt seem at all like a joke, sorry if i thought wrong.

Ya so now i can remember more, OOM

oomis

crazybrit

the wolf

Writesoul

Sayididit

Mosk

Zees

Curiousity…..

we could all be one poster, but then thrre wouldnt be any SUC if i was another poster, so sometimes i just think its me and 1 other guy with a MAJOR personality disorder