dancinggirl

wow! oberservantteen i loveed your poem! it was so raw with feelings…did anyone like my poem ‘there is no justice…?’ i really wnna hear feadback!

very unique style…thanx!

heres another poem i wrote

there is no justice among man

there is no right to fight or ban

for man is but a speck of earth

in a wide and mighty universe

to learn to laugh to cry to give

this all is naught when start to dig

thaT gaping hole in which they lie

which mocks all times of mirth and cry

and when another does passby

no thought or care for he who lie

continue on to laugh and live

forgetting that for him will dig

a gaping hole in which he’ll lie

which mocks all times of mirth and cry

here, ill start, this is a poem i wrotemothers:

I must say i am not the ultimate to say what a mother shud be

Because you are the only mother that has been known to me

And if you ask ‘what aremothers like?’this is all i can possibly write

But i speak for only one, mymother, my life

A mother is the highest, the most important in ones life

She is the wise one, the kind one, the mender of all strife

Understanding, love and caring are but a few of her virtues

As her child you are preciouse, to her you never lose

When you look intoher eyes, you see there only care

You just want to hug her, to kiss her and to share

You know she hasthe answers to all that life will bring

All knowing, allcaring, she brings you up to sing

So you see this is a mother, from my biased point of view

I just hope this is correct, and holds for others true

because My mother is the highest of what a mother can possibly be

She is the dearest, the wisest, and means the most to me