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Let me know what you think…
I focus on you,
And I don’t know what to say
I’m familiar with what I see,
the look of crying and dismay.
Although she wants to hide it,
It’s the color of my mothers eyes
Hidden under the happiness,
Which she wears as a disguise.
It’s the face of my friend,
Lost and alone
Overpowered by the drugs,
No emotion being shown.
It’s the person in the mirror,
Who once felt the same
Overuled by the tension,
Trapped inside the pain.
I see the look in your eyes,
How you just want to slip away
Forget about tomorrow,
And end it all today.
But just because thugs are hard,
And you’re scared to move along
Don’t let that one fear,
Keep you from staying strong.
BwashereMemberI read secular books, and I would read Jewish ones but I have the same problem.
I read a really good book though- its not a novel- but its called The Thinking Jewish Teenagers Guide to Life…
BwashereMemberAww thanks, glad u like them
BwashereMemberThis one has a tune in my head and obviously needs work…
Its a new day,
but it feels the same
The clock is ticking,
but the time won’t change
Its like yesterday,
thats stuck on pause
Nothing gained,
yet nothing lost
Try to jump ahead,
but life stands still
Try to rewind,
try and make this real
But remember,
don’t get stuck in time
This is your chance,
so make it right.
Its a new day,
don’t make it the same
The clock is ticking,
its time to change
You had yesterday,
so don’t press pause
Don’t live in the past,
and don’t get lost
Now you’re ahead,
so don’t stand still
It’s your life,
Its yours to reveal.
BwashereMemberI hear it,
the silence
The empty air,
surrounding my head.
I feel it,
the tension
The rising anger,
trapped in my skin.
I see it,
the line
The long division,
planted between us.
I’m in it,
the lie
The “perfect” bubble,
that only haunts me.
Can I break the silence,
and bring in new air?
Can I break the tension,
make it dissapear?
Csn I break the line,
that I’m forced to see?
Can I break the bubble,
thats been defining me?
No.
It takes two to talk,
so I’m silent.
With no place to scream,
I’m left feeling tense.
There’s a clear division,
so I drew a line.
You have created a lie,
and I’m left in a bubble.
If you break the silence,
then I’ll break mine.
If you break the tension,
I’ll slowly relax.
If you break the line,
then I’ll know things are ok.
I’m living in a bubble,
thats waiting to be popped.
Let me know what you think…
BwashereMemberWow! All of ur Poems were amazing.
Dancinggirl I love love love both of your poems.
Observanteen yours was awesome too- I totally understand that.
I have more to post and I’ll try and post later 🙂
BwashereMemberJudge-mental minds,
putting on labels
Drawing lines,
cutting people out.
The World is a Tangled Web
Conceited peers,
Causing tears,
without even knowing.
The World is a Tangled Web
A backstabbing friend,
whom you thought was true
But then it came to an end,
because of their actions.
The World is a Tangled Web
People committing crime,
thinking life would suddenly get better
A waste of their time,
which will bring guilt later.
The World is a Tangled Web
Yes, people can change their ways,
start with yourself, build up from there
Make it better for our kids days,
so it is not as bad as this.
Will the World Ever Untangle its Web
BwashereMemberAwww thanks so much, so touched.
BwashereMemberThis one is super rough, and also personal. Needa fix it up one of these days…
Hi,
are You still there
listening to me
helping me
guiding me
loving me?
After I turned on You,
ignored You
questioned You
lost You?
Of corse You are.
I turned from You,
and got lost on the way
But You waited to guide me,
while I walked in circles.
I ignored You,
because I couldn’t hear my voice
But You were waiting to listen,
while I pretended to sort out my problems.
I questioned You,
and didn’t wait for the answers
But somehow You still loved me,
even though I didn’t love myself.
I lost You,
When I really just lost myself
But You waited for me,
and listened to my cries
You helped me get through them,
and guided me on the way
You showed your unconditional love,
So I know that You’re still here.
You always were.
I just wasn’t opening my eyes,
not wide enough.
BwashereMemberHey,
I’m new with this… but let me know what you think 🙂
I wrote this in 1 class period, so it obviously needs work…
Wherever I go,
4 corners follow me
No matter how fast I run,
they stick at my feet
1 corner traps me,
so that its impossible to escape
And I can’t help but sit there,
staring at the white walls.
1 corner hides me,
from everyone outside
And I can’t help but wonder,
whats going on around me.
1 corner guides me,
paves out my path
And I can’t help but think,
where I’ll be next.
1 corner protects me,
from the world I live in
And I can’t help but bang,
praying someone will hear me.
4 croners.
One to trap
One to hide
One to guide
One to protect.
But what about doors?
So that I can escape,
when I feel trapped.
So that I can really hide,
not behind walls.
So that i can learn,
to guide myself at times.
I don’t need 4 corners,
in order to be protected.
What I need are some doors,
next to each corner.
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