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  • in reply to: ATT POETRY PEOPLE #1167047
    Bwashere
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    Let me know what you think…

    I focus on you,

    And I don’t know what to say

    I’m familiar with what I see,

    the look of crying and dismay.

    Although she wants to hide it,

    It’s the color of my mothers eyes

    Hidden under the happiness,

    Which she wears as a disguise.

    It’s the face of my friend,

    Lost and alone

    Overpowered by the drugs,

    No emotion being shown.

    It’s the person in the mirror,

    Who once felt the same

    Overuled by the tension,

    Trapped inside the pain.

    I see the look in your eyes,

    How you just want to slip away

    Forget about tomorrow,

    And end it all today.

    But just because thugs are hard,

    And you’re scared to move along

    Don’t let that one fear,

    Keep you from staying strong.

    in reply to: THERE ARE NO BOOKS TO READ!!!! #762588
    Bwashere
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    I read secular books, and I would read Jewish ones but I have the same problem.

    I read a really good book though- its not a novel- but its called The Thinking Jewish Teenagers Guide to Life…

    in reply to: ATT POETRY PEOPLE #1167025
    Bwashere
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    Aww thanks, glad u like them

    in reply to: ATT POETRY PEOPLE #1167023
    Bwashere
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    This one has a tune in my head and obviously needs work…

    Its a new day,

    but it feels the same

    The clock is ticking,

    but the time won’t change

    Its like yesterday,

    thats stuck on pause

    Nothing gained,

    yet nothing lost

    Try to jump ahead,

    but life stands still

    Try to rewind,

    try and make this real

    But remember,

    don’t get stuck in time

    This is your chance,

    so make it right.

    Its a new day,

    don’t make it the same

    The clock is ticking,

    its time to change

    You had yesterday,

    so don’t press pause

    Don’t live in the past,

    and don’t get lost

    Now you’re ahead,

    so don’t stand still

    It’s your life,

    Its yours to reveal.

    in reply to: ATT POETRY PEOPLE #1167022
    Bwashere
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    I hear it,

    the silence

    The empty air,

    surrounding my head.

    I feel it,

    the tension

    The rising anger,

    trapped in my skin.

    I see it,

    the line

    The long division,

    planted between us.

    I’m in it,

    the lie

    The “perfect” bubble,

    that only haunts me.

    Can I break the silence,

    and bring in new air?

    Can I break the tension,

    make it dissapear?

    Csn I break the line,

    that I’m forced to see?

    Can I break the bubble,

    thats been defining me?

    No.

    It takes two to talk,

    so I’m silent.

    With no place to scream,

    I’m left feeling tense.

    There’s a clear division,

    so I drew a line.

    You have created a lie,

    and I’m left in a bubble.

    If you break the silence,

    then I’ll break mine.

    If you break the tension,

    I’ll slowly relax.

    If you break the line,

    then I’ll know things are ok.

    I’m living in a bubble,

    thats waiting to be popped.

    Let me know what you think…

    in reply to: ATT POETRY PEOPLE #1167021
    Bwashere
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    Wow! All of ur Poems were amazing.

    Dancinggirl I love love love both of your poems.

    Observanteen yours was awesome too- I totally understand that.

    I have more to post and I’ll try and post later 🙂

    in reply to: ATT POETRY PEOPLE #1166997
    Bwashere
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    Judge-mental minds,

    putting on labels

    Drawing lines,

    cutting people out.

    The World is a Tangled Web

    Conceited peers,

    Causing tears,

    without even knowing.

    The World is a Tangled Web

    A backstabbing friend,

    whom you thought was true

    But then it came to an end,

    because of their actions.

    The World is a Tangled Web

    People committing crime,

    thinking life would suddenly get better

    A waste of their time,

    which will bring guilt later.

    The World is a Tangled Web

    Yes, people can change their ways,

    start with yourself, build up from there

    Make it better for our kids days,

    so it is not as bad as this.

    Will the World Ever Untangle its Web

    in reply to: ATT POETRY PEOPLE #1166995
    Bwashere
    Member

    Awww thanks so much, so touched.

    in reply to: ATT POETRY PEOPLE #1166990
    Bwashere
    Member

    This one is super rough, and also personal. Needa fix it up one of these days…

    Hi,

    are You still there

    listening to me

    helping me

    guiding me

    loving me?

    After I turned on You,

    ignored You

    questioned You

    lost You?

    Of corse You are.

    I turned from You,

    and got lost on the way

    But You waited to guide me,

    while I walked in circles.

    I ignored You,

    because I couldn’t hear my voice

    But You were waiting to listen,

    while I pretended to sort out my problems.

    I questioned You,

    and didn’t wait for the answers

    But somehow You still loved me,

    even though I didn’t love myself.

    I lost You,

    When I really just lost myself

    But You waited for me,

    and listened to my cries

    You helped me get through them,

    and guided me on the way

    You showed your unconditional love,

    So I know that You’re still here.

    You always were.

    I just wasn’t opening my eyes,

    not wide enough.

    in reply to: ATT POETRY PEOPLE #1166988
    Bwashere
    Member

    Hey,

    I’m new with this… but let me know what you think 🙂

    I wrote this in 1 class period, so it obviously needs work…

    Wherever I go,

    4 corners follow me

    No matter how fast I run,

    they stick at my feet

    1 corner traps me,

    so that its impossible to escape

    And I can’t help but sit there,

    staring at the white walls.

    1 corner hides me,

    from everyone outside

    And I can’t help but wonder,

    whats going on around me.

    1 corner guides me,

    paves out my path

    And I can’t help but think,

    where I’ll be next.

    1 corner protects me,

    from the world I live in

    And I can’t help but bang,

    praying someone will hear me.

    4 croners.

    One to trap

    One to hide

    One to guide

    One to protect.

    But what about doors?

    So that I can escape,

    when I feel trapped.

    So that I can really hide,

    not behind walls.

    So that i can learn,

    to guide myself at times.

    I don’t need 4 corners,

    in order to be protected.

    What I need are some doors,

    next to each corner.

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