Oh, and please proofread them before sending them to the publisher! The reader should not have to reread a paragraph because there were no verbs! Basic grammar should be fixed!!! Diction needs help too! I dont mean to be a basher, but the books need to be understandable and lend a desire to be read more then once (and not because there was nothing else to read). Many books are the same plot over and over and it just shouldnt be like that! Characters need to be more then words- they need to be alive!