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I thank him every day!
There is just so much to say……….
Thank you hashem i am healthy
thank you hashem i am wealthy
thank you hashem i have food to eat
thank you hashem i can walk with my feet
thank you… etc etc.
I appreciate every day
that’s all i can say!
Thank you, APushetaYid
For your sweet, little rhyme
Your words are important
To remember all the time
Hashem’s endless gifts
His constant love and care
Must always be appreciated
(Finsih off with any line here)
Hey, why do poems sound so easy to write, until you actually try to write one?
This is worth 50 posts! Keep it coming!
I would add to this thread, like I created a similar one (thanking HaShem) without a rhyme. Problem is I can’t write a poem, AT ALL. So jealous of you guys, limericks and poems effortlessly flow like a fountain!
Just write a few lines that rhyme to each other
Don’t rhyme words like bother and brother
Try to be sure the meter matches
It should not sound like it’s made of patches
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