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August 18, 2011 2:35 am at 2:35 am #1222062brotherofursParticipant
it’s very easy,
after you get used to it,
now it’s a habit,
August 18, 2011 2:37 am at 2:37 am #1222063brotherofursParticipantlets get the rules straight,
is there a winner for this?
is rhyming allowed?
August 18, 2011 2:39 am at 2:39 am #1222064brotherofursParticipanti think it should be,
after all it’s quite easy
even now, for me 🙂
August 18, 2011 3:42 am at 3:42 am #1222065ursula momishMember“Jews can’t do Haiku
…” (theprof1)
Since I cannot wrap
my mind around this verse form
I offer others’ work
“In Japan haikus have to be about nature…” (Sister Bear)
(“…technically haiku …is about nature; senryu is about the human condition.” Ivy Reisner)
My nature journal —
Today, I saw some trees and birds.
I should know the names?
(from Haikus for Jews: For You, a Little Wisdom
David M. Bader)
August 18, 2011 3:46 am at 3:46 am #1222066am yisrael chaiParticipantBraishis bara
Elokim es hashamayim
Vi’es ha’aretz
August 18, 2011 3:19 pm at 3:19 pm #1222067mkyMemberElo…..hashamayim
8 syllables
the shma haiku though was better
July 19, 2012 12:42 am at 12:42 am #1222068Doodle-Manâ„¢MemberI like to Bump™ threads
‘Specially at 9PM
It’s 8:42
July 19, 2012 1:27 am at 1:27 am #1222069golferParticipantTo moski:
Have a pleasant night
Hope you are not waiting up
To read more haiku
July 19, 2012 1:30 am at 1:30 am #1222070golferParticipantTo mods:
In the coffee room
Many posters sitting waiting
For mods to post posts
July 19, 2012 1:35 am at 1:35 am #1222071golferParticipantTo CR:
Shidduchim laundry
Hair extensions and haiku
All in coffee room
July 19, 2012 1:44 am at 1:44 am #1222072golferParticipantThis is the first time
The mods deleted my post
Surprised! twas haiku
July 19, 2012 1:53 am at 1:53 am #1222073Doodle-Manâ„¢MemberTo Golfer:
Thank you and you too
No I am not too tired
I read your haiku
July 19, 2012 12:30 pm at 12:30 pm #1222074golferParticipantMods did not delete
My humblest apologies
Misunderstanding
July 19, 2012 6:56 pm at 6:56 pm #1222075golferParticipantWisdom of the CR
Men! Hat to Minyan!
Must be a Borsalino
With a three inch brim
July 19, 2012 7:01 pm at 7:01 pm #1222076golferParticipantWisdom of the CR #2
Not commonly used
Serach Machla and Getzel
Are unusual names
July 19, 2012 7:06 pm at 7:06 pm #1222077golferParticipantWisdom of the CR #3
Dating more than One
Makes many complications
Not good idea
July 19, 2012 7:09 pm at 7:09 pm #1222078golferParticipantWisdom of the CR #4
Posters vie for prize
Who is posting most often?
Most influential?
July 19, 2012 7:14 pm at 7:14 pm #1222079golferParticipantWisdom of the CR #5
Correcting spelling
Grammar & punctuation
Makes MorahRach sad
July 19, 2012 7:17 pm at 7:17 pm #1222080golferParticipantWisdom of the CR #6
Nine Days are coming
Do all your laundry Quickly
And use your towels
July 19, 2012 7:19 pm at 7:19 pm #1222081golferParticipantWisdom of the CR #7
Those off the Derech
Those attempting to stay on
All Hashem’s Children
July 19, 2012 9:57 pm at 9:57 pm #1222082Doodle-Manâ„¢MemberGolfer makes haikus
They can be very clever
please give him a sub
July 20, 2012 2:52 pm at 2:52 pm #1222083Doodle-Manâ„¢Memberantidisestab-
lishmentariansm
Wow, what a long word
February 25, 2013 8:10 pm at 8:10 pm #1222084OneOfManyParticipanthelp me, i am trapped
in a haiku factory
save me, before they
(not written by OOM [who wishes it had been])
March 6, 2017 9:03 pm at 9:03 pm #1222085👑RebYidd23ParticipantHaiku should be Japanese.
March 6, 2017 9:17 pm at 9:17 pm #1222086LightbriteParticipantThis six year old thread
RebYidd23 opened
Is alive again
March 6, 2017 9:21 pm at 9:21 pm #1222087LightbriteParticipantWisdom of the CR #8
If you need shidduch
Do not start smoking today
Wait till 1-19
March 6, 2017 9:22 pm at 9:22 pm #1222088LightbriteParticipantWisdom of the CR #9
If you wear lipstick
Carmine bugs are A-Okay
If they are “May be”
March 6, 2017 9:24 pm at 9:24 pm #1222089LightbriteParticipantWisdom of the CR #10
It’s muttar to cross
The road when the light is red
But only by foot
March 6, 2017 9:25 pm at 9:25 pm #1222090LightbriteParticipantWisdom of the CR #11
Joseph is Joseph
But who else is this Joseph?
I will never know
March 7, 2017 1:53 pm at 1:53 pm #1222092LightbriteParticipantWisdom of the CR #12
Are you a Hero?
Devorah and Shimson were
You can be one too
March 7, 2017 1:55 pm at 1:55 pm #1222093LightbriteParticipantWisdom of the CR #13
Do not overlook
Tomatillos at the store
And your kosher plate
March 7, 2017 2:52 pm at 2:52 pm #1222094golferParticipantTo GG
Gedaliah Goomber
Exactly Five syllables
What a perfect fix
Won’t work on Shabbos
So he yelled watch out below
Dropped his ton of bricks
Many years later
CR revives our hero
To get his last licks
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