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    brotherofurs
    Participant

    it’s very easy,

    after you get used to it,

    now it’s a habit,

    #1222063
    brotherofurs
    Participant

    lets get the rules straight,

    is there a winner for this?

    is rhyming allowed?

    #1222064
    brotherofurs
    Participant

    i think it should be,

    after all it’s quite easy

    even now, for me 🙂

    #1222065

    “Jews can’t do Haiku

    …” (theprof1)

    Since I cannot wrap

    my mind around this verse form

    I offer others’ work

    “In Japan haikus have to be about nature…” (Sister Bear)

    (“…technically haiku …is about nature; senryu is about the human condition.” Ivy Reisner)

    My nature journal —

    Today, I saw some trees and birds.

    I should know the names?

    (from Haikus for Jews: For You, a Little Wisdom

    David M. Bader)

    #1222066
    am yisrael chai
    Participant

    Braishis bara

    Elokim es hashamayim

    Vi’es ha’aretz

    #1222067
    mky
    Member

    Elo…..hashamayim

    8 syllables

    the shma haiku though was better

    #1222068

    I like to Bump™ threads

    ‘Specially at 9PM

    It’s 8:42

    #1222069
    golfer
    Participant

    To moski:

    Have a pleasant night

    Hope you are not waiting up

    To read more haiku

    #1222070
    golfer
    Participant

    To mods:

    In the coffee room

    Many posters sitting waiting

    For mods to post posts

    #1222071
    golfer
    Participant

    To CR:

    Shidduchim laundry

    Hair extensions and haiku

    All in coffee room

    #1222072
    golfer
    Participant

    This is the first time

    The mods deleted my post

    Surprised! twas haiku

    #1222073

    To Golfer:

    Thank you and you too

    No I am not too tired

    I read your haiku

    #1222074
    golfer
    Participant

    Mods did not delete

    My humblest apologies

    Misunderstanding

    #1222075
    golfer
    Participant

    Wisdom of the CR

    Men! Hat to Minyan!

    Must be a Borsalino

    With a three inch brim

    #1222076
    golfer
    Participant

    Wisdom of the CR #2

    Not commonly used

    Serach Machla and Getzel

    Are unusual names

    #1222077
    golfer
    Participant

    Wisdom of the CR #3

    Dating more than One

    Makes many complications

    Not good idea

    #1222078
    golfer
    Participant

    Wisdom of the CR #4

    Posters vie for prize

    Who is posting most often?

    Most influential?

    #1222079
    golfer
    Participant

    Wisdom of the CR #5

    Correcting spelling

    Grammar & punctuation

    Makes MorahRach sad

    #1222080
    golfer
    Participant

    Wisdom of the CR #6

    Nine Days are coming

    Do all your laundry Quickly

    And use your towels

    #1222081
    golfer
    Participant

    Wisdom of the CR #7

    Those off the Derech

    Those attempting to stay on

    All Hashem’s Children

    #1222082

    Golfer makes haikus

    They can be very clever

    please give him a sub

    #1222083

    antidisestab-

    lishmentariansm

    Wow, what a long word

    #1222084
    OneOfMany
    Participant

    help me, i am trapped

    in a haiku factory

    save me, before they

    (not written by OOM [who wishes it had been])

    #1222085
    👑RebYidd23
    Participant

    Haiku should be Japanese.

    #1222086
    Lightbrite
    Participant

    This six year old thread

    RebYidd23 opened

    Is alive again

    #1222087
    Lightbrite
    Participant

    Wisdom of the CR #8

    If you need shidduch

    Do not start smoking today

    Wait till 1-19

    #1222088
    Lightbrite
    Participant

    Wisdom of the CR #9

    If you wear lipstick

    Carmine bugs are A-Okay

    If they are “May be”

    #1222089
    Lightbrite
    Participant

    Wisdom of the CR #10

    It’s muttar to cross

    The road when the light is red

    But only by foot

    #1222090
    Lightbrite
    Participant

    Wisdom of the CR #11

    Joseph is Joseph

    But who else is this Joseph?

    I will never know

    #1222092
    Lightbrite
    Participant

    Wisdom of the CR #12

    Are you a Hero?

    Devorah and Shimson were

    You can be one too

    #1222093
    Lightbrite
    Participant

    Wisdom of the CR #13

    Do not overlook

    Tomatillos at the store

    And your kosher plate

    #1222094
    golfer
    Participant

    To GG

    Gedaliah Goomber

    Exactly Five syllables

    What a perfect fix

    Won’t work on Shabbos

    So he yelled watch out below

    Dropped his ton of bricks

    Many years later

    CR revives our hero

    To get his last licks

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