“As mentioned above these are “resumes”.”
No, they are not resumes, they are “personal bios”. It is a piece of paper with basic information that anyone would want to know about a potential shidduch. The piece of paper should not try to SELL anyone, nor should anyone try to sell themselves via a piece of paper. Once you start quibling what and how to write things, the piece of paper loses its worth. Want to know what someone is about? Read their bio, ask a few questions and either go out with them, or tell the shadchan you are not interested quickly and let the process start with someone else.