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June 14, 2012 6:11 pm at 6:11 pm
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I can only try
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Luna Lovegood-
No One Mourns The Wicked-
blabla-
Too Cool-
Those are very well written.
The optimistic tone of “Luna Lovegood” is appreciated, “No One Mourns The Wicked”s follow up to the stressed tone is good to see, “blabla” hase nice imagery, although a bit less loneliness would probably be better, and “Too Cool”, well, it’s very eloquent, but sad – hope things improve.
Sorry for not commenting until now.
SaysMe-
Agreed, 100%.