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April 3, 2012 6:15 pm at 6:15 pm
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MiddlePath
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blabla, I’m sorry you had a hard day. Your poem is beautifully written. SaysMe’s words of encouragement are really lovely. I just would like to point out that you began each phrase with the word “Sometimes”. I think that shows that these seemingly negative and unfortunate things do happen sometimes. But, there are other times when we see hope, happiness, and positiveness, and we should try our best to hang on to those times the most, and hope that those times can make the negative times less stressful and less hurtful. Wishing you a better day today, and know that we all believe in you, and are thinking of you.