Welcome back, blaba! And wow! Your new poems are really amazing! The one about the wedding is truly beautiful, it conveys the imagery of a Jewish wedding so well. May we all get to that point in our lives at the right time.
The poem about the baby is wonderful. I’m just wondering: In the last line, are you referring to G-d? Because that’s absolutely true, we must care for our children and love them and raise them well partly because it is G-d’s child as well.
PrincessEagle, I’m with you on the “Poetry n’ C-C”!