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am yisrael chai
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PrincessEagle

“AYC you always say such nice things, i love your posts! (if you look quite a few posts up i actually posted something i wrote! I like your comments, did i mention??! jk)”

I apologize for the oversight

Thanks for letting me set things right

I’m glad you brought it to my attention

So I could read the poem that you mention

Your poem should definitely be published

Your message that Jews not feel arbitrarily punished

With themes of hope and trust that you’ve cleverly woven

We should believe in the Justice and continue to daven

Absolutely LOVED this poem a ton

Don’t make us wait long till the next one!

(perhaps you might consider adding “seeming/apparent/obvious” in

‘I let tragedies happen with no “apparent” source’)