the “o” in chol hamoeid is not pronounced like the “o” in pot.
seider has a d, as does agudah.
chavrusa tumel, italicized or chavrusa tumult, the second word unitalicized.
“daven for the amud” doesn’t make any sense.
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what simcha613 said, plus- ‘tokeia’ not “ba’al tokeia”
chanukkah and purim are not chagim
“licht bentchin” should probably be “licht tzindin”
people go to shul (or a bais k’neses), not to minyan.
there are no three day yomim tovim.