ROB, I’m puzzled as to why you think what he wrote earlier is his maskana. I quoted his conclusion. His concluding words are “??? ?? ??????”.
Is that not clear?
And I don’t know about you, but even assuming that “yuhara” is only a mild critique (and I don’t know why you assume that), I wouldn’t want to be subject to even a mild critique by the Levush or the Rema.