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☕ DaasYochid ☕
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What a great poem

from our esteemed member,

who calls himself, oddly,

Yashi and Pember.

He goes after “Bolevnik”,

who writes insecurely,

of readers who write,

but make their rhymes poorly.

He does so with humor,

while taking his own advice,

his cadence is perfect,

his rhymes are precise.

(While driving on the Goethals,

I tried to rhyme with “umbrage”,

But I could hardly concentrate,

while crossing that dumb bridge.)

A message from Chatzkel,

to one Rocky Zweig,

If the FJJ rejects you,

maybe just shveig?

The words that I write here,

are purely in jest,

have a gut voch, and until next week –

hatzlocha, and all the best!